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Submitted: June 14, 2010
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Make:NIKON CORPORATION
Model:NIKON D80
Shutter Speed:1 second
Aperture:F/3.5
Focal Length:18 mm
ISO Speed:100
Date Taken:Jun 15, 2010, 12:21:50 AM

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Charlotteby *KatiBear

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Critique by *Cimeara Jun 14, 2010, 8:23:25 PM

It -is- beautiful. I think the placement of the, er, drips is just perfect. Not too many, not too messy. My monitor is having a problem with the garment, though. It comes across as a plain black shirt unless I look at it very hard. Somehow the flower calls for a nore noticeable ruffle or part of a lace shawl or some similar touch of balancing antique formality. Some touch of the same colour at least, something that reads as the same gray. Or else crop it at shoulders? I also thought at first that the the curl to the left read too much as a plain old-fashioned hair curler. But whenever I think what else might go there, it ruins the shot. It does need that other white-rimmed eye staring out at the viewer.

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